Open Poetry #32 |
was that my heart that stopped.. |
exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
was that my heart that stopped i feel like i can't breathe. i'm fine red rimmed eyelids. whisper remember this.. remember this feeling everytime you smile, everytime you breathe.. remember your tears remember this feeling.. i can't forget. did you have to be so cruel say you love me, let the words burn through your mouth lies are like acid for your soul.. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A lightning strike to the heart with it's brand. TD |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
sad, but well depicted. Sade |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes the cruelest lie of all that one for sure |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
lies don't taste good and they are hard to swallow. my man does nothing but lie, i can get over anything, and understand it, but lies, you can't deal with lies, i enjoyed reading this. thanks for sharing |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
What a very stunning lasts line, and so true! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh...good piece...much enjoyed |
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