Open Poetry #32 |
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....and still he makes me feel....... |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA ![]() |
Blurred these visions never quite filled my eyes the same since he became the enemy my only, just as submissive wont taste the same after she and he and you and I. On your midnight walk in sobering thoughts up and away from where I drink you drunk fog shall reach you entwine her fingers over your eyes, and you will look at me with ironic clarity to find I am not who you thought. In the end you will look through me and I you.... Convinced blurred vision will come to your naive bliss, I never want to fall unconditionally through thick rains again when all I have is battered skin. He still makes me feel deceased watching from skies with no way to touch the living with my breath. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"He still makes me feel deceased watching from skies with no way to touch the living with my breath." sigh. I've got one of those too. Hit close to home, this beauty did... hugs gem |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gawd Gem...so good..so real... Heart Hugs. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
what a write...made me think long and hard,Gemma M |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Magnificent images Gem, you're a lovely. Maree ![]() The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colours, but the sea, does not change. |
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aujussy wolf![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
boom , what an impact !! also holds a spell over the reader , nice work -wolfy |
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GlisteningRain Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 103The clouds |
...... That was really good. sincerely, B |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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