Open Poetry #32 |
For Her Because |
Martie
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Posts 28049California |
Beauty There is beauty in every face a twinkle a glow arch of lid breath of flower and to trace line and form is no miracle to sleight of hand but the heart light that grows and cascades from within Marian She left her mark within my cheekbones as sure as summer her shape is mine I even think within the lining of my heart she left her sign The shaded place of back yard peace like open book is where she stays sometimes she is in the humming of mourning dove upon her grave I see the skirt of many colors circle round her sun tanned legs I see her reach across the chasm place four leaf clovers on the page So fragile is the lip of time that death has left upon my heart in the evening dwells the perfumed evening breeze her fragrance’s part Gather round her all the wild flowers oceans place her in their fold captured are the star night feathers that fall upon her heavenly stroll I see her in my mirror smiling she shades her eyes within my own and in the sand of summer’s footprints she is not walking all alone ________ Reposted ....In memory of my mother |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I had hoped you would... and I am glad you did... your mother lives on, in your love, and in your flowers... and especially in your words... Love you, Sis... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ Classically classical~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes...thank you for reminding |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
A most beautiful tribute, Martie! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"She left her mark within my cheekbones as sure as summer her shape is mine" A legacy you should be proud of lovely lady. Happy Mother's Day Martie. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A beautiful tribute Martie.... Happy Mothers Day! Maree The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea changes colours, but the sea, does not change. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A beautiful tribute to your mother Martie. She does indeed live on in you.... Now I really really miss my mom. ~Heart Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
beautiful...the poem and the photo that goes with it.....you touched my heart with this |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
Martie, I am glad you reposted....as this is my first time read. A wonderful tribute and definately worth a reread and reread. Very nicely said! pictureme :-) |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Martie -- I am filled with sweet tears over this very, very lovely memorial for your mother. Thank you for sharing. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I do see you in her....in the lovely picture (both of them), and in every line you've written here. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie You write beauty so floorlessly. |
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Kit McCallum
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Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"She left her mark within my cheekbones as sure as summer her shape is mine I even think within the lining of my heart she left her sign" "I see her in my mirror smiling she shades her eyes within my own and in the sand of summer’s footprints she is not walking all alone" Martie, the beauty in these sentiments is simply stunning. I could visualize you looking into a mirror and seeing your mother's reflection smiling back toward you. You have penned delicate lines of heartfelt beauty and love. Such a wonderful read. Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
very special tribute Martie - Paul |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I'm glad you reposted this Martie...exceptionally riviting grasp this has...wonderful write...very much enjoyed |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
As always Martie, you leave me in awe. Simply beautiful. So glad to find you still here. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
"She left her mark within my cheekbones as sure as summer her shape is mine I even think within the lining of my heart she left her sign" I had not read this before and it is beautiful in sentiment and also displays the continued pure beauty of your heart Martie. You do indeed look like your mother, and I unfortunatey also look like mine Hope you had a great Mother's Day. Today I'm only moving clouds, tomorrow I'll try mountains. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Martie, it is as tho' you are looking out at us from long ago... The resemblance with your Mom is uncanny. You also have her spirited sparkle! The depth of love in your words really moved me. A beautiful poem from, and for, a beautiful soul. Loving hugs, Linda |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Such a beautiful, moving tribute. *S* I'm glad I didn't miss this. *S* |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent write! Really enjoyed the read. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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