Open Poetry #32 |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Rain trickles down window pane, translucent reflected light, droplets run in rivulets. Streaming in my mind. Then into my mind you enter. A smile plays on my lips, a shudder of delight, of bliss. Contentedly i lay back. Staring into nothingness, i attempt to see forward. We sit together, you reading, while i write, glancing at you. Music plays softly, sun streams, the room filled with light, mostly generated by your glow. I read my poem, you smile warmly. Your company so beautiful, heart ready to see perfection, in art, music, literature, nature. We talk, discuss, admire. Sat at table i watch how you eat, your manerisms. Politeness, gratitude, respect, i kiss your cheek, in your homage. ''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lovely write |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Hello and thank you Dixe...may i draw your attention to my post on announcements and links section....i have posted a dday post...thank you... Goldenrose. ''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I can't wait to feel that first kiss... Love~ARh Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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LucidityNow Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 118Canada |
OMG! Something about this poem just made me shudder in delight! This is what one calls TRUE love. I could almost feel the energy you felt from the one that inspired this poem. AWESOME!!! and i'm certain that if i drive into those trees, it would make less of a mess, than she's made of me... |
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MERCURY Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 190Ireland |
Staring into nothingness, i attempt to see forward. i liked this imagery |
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