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Bag the dawn Piper
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Bag the dawn Piper |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa 
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a small picket fence of people looking fuzzy to the east the grass too high and wet and the melody dripped down on the cobblestones of the drone breath made love with morning fog shaking sleep from eyes like windyflags the lull of the bag and the caffeine of pipes like ice blown monochrome from winter's trees the highest notes on a piano and the solid earth below middle C waiting expectant till the bag and pipes.... the drone of all the insects in the world and the melody of crazy beginnings made this Morning Blush |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
hf...WOW! I'm keeping it. Maree  What are you my god? You touch me like you are my god |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
thanks Maree... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
damn you, give me some of dat muse |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh dang... dang... wow... |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
The piper at the gates of dawn has always been a great image. excellent write, Sir! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
fantastically woven! interlaced images, senses...and I love the "made the morning Blush" most of all! A truly nice piece! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...had to read this twice! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
bag the dawn piper? You certainly did. |
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