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Open Poetry #32

Walk With Me

Darker Season
Junior Member

since 2004-04-01

Posts 48
Wisconsin

0 posted 2004-04-16 06:46 PM

Walk With Me
****************

You think I'm crazy...that I'm out of my mind
But, hey, look at you...you're just a step behind

There's two coins to every side
A never ending, circus ride
You think you saw the truth in here
But nothing shown was that sincere
It's all a mindless, wild guess
The answer's no, but mostly yes
Just show you're light, then let me fade
‘Cause I'm your shadow in the shade

Walk with me

There's five sides to every square
More than I see, more than you'll share
And now we hold this endless rope
Climbing up to reach for hope
It's all so easy, don't you know
The answer's yes, but most no
Just show you're light, then let me fade
'Cause I'm your shadow in the shade

You think I'm crazy...that I'm out of my mind
But, hey, look at you...you're just a step behind…

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-04-16 06:54 PM

"Just show you're light, then let me fade
'Cause I'm your shadow in the shade

You think I'm crazy...that I'm out of my mind
But, hey, look at you...you're just a step behind…"

I like this..like it very much Andrew.
You turn out some exceptional work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2004-04-16 06:57 PM

Nice flow and spin to this one. Well done.
TD

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

3 posted 2004-04-17 09:35 PM

diddo

Juju

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

4 posted 2004-04-17 09:38 PM

really liked this one

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

5 posted 2004-04-18 12:10 PM

i agree

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-04-18 04:14 AM

this is so cool!

Darker Season
Junior Member

since 2004-04-01

Posts 48
Wisconsin

7 posted 2004-04-20 04:16 PM

Thanks

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