Open Poetry #32 |
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Inner Fire |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
I want to be the wind That comes to you across the plains To be the ocean boundless As I swallow all of your rain Arms outstretched My head back, I look to the sky Let that rain fall on my face To drown what I feel inside I am to be the youth in you Feel me, I am all that you desire If life is but a short journey Then for now, I will be your inner fire |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am to be the youth in you Feel me, I am all that you desire If life is but a short journey Then for now, I will be your inner fire ~*~ What a wonderful thought! As we age, there is still that sense of youthful fire in us...I know...I see it often in Sy's writing as well. Good job, PK - very good! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beg the blowing wind, the sea and sky to give The precious moments passed that I may now relive The love that I once tossed into the willful breeze And reappears in prayer upon these bended knees Whewwww, what intreging thoughts...powerfully articulated! Very much enjoyed...have a wonderful day and weekend ahead |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
Thanks all..... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh...I took a different road on this, pleasant and wonderful write... Drink of all life offers until you are quenched. Such pleasure and delight is all of youth held in the soul! Awesome! TD |
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