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a therapy session in the icy light (a duet with brian sites) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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"anyway, as I was saying..." smile? I think that I forget. But I love you ever mad I will take this to my grave robbing corners squared of dirt for a finger's prayer of us .........the knowledge we can only guess the shroud a linen memory of you of you of you I weep for you you are the closest thing to the inside of my skin that backdrop of pillows, lace this bacon coffee cookies baked icecream and the color brown and the race................and the sweat that taste of "no, we're not there yet" says Dad, and highway winks "almost" all of it the furrow's brow.... disappears with you your smile a face that fits beneath my chin reconciling rationale Iris grows inside the cave-- icecream and the color brown playing underside my lids smiling in my sleep... I dream highway twining fingers mine. [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (05-07-2004 04:29 PM).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"I think that I forget. But I love you ever mad I will take this to my grave robbing corners squared of dirt for a finger's prayer of us .........the knowledge we can only guess the shroud a linen memory of you of you of you" And this... "Iris grows inside the cave-- icecream and the color brown playing underside my lids smiling in my sleep... I dream highway twining fingers mine." Karen?...just smiling at you...  I absolutely LOVE this... You are beautiful...smile...  "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
This strikes me with song-like quality.. I could hum it in my head. Beautiful |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
But I love you ever mad I will take this to my grave robbing corners squared of dirt for a finger's prayer of us Just...Wow, Gorgeous.  Mxx What are you my god? You touch me like you are my god |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
the furrow's brow.... disappears with you your smile Another amazing write, Karen. Hugs, Ethel Mae |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
for you you are the closest thing to the inside of my skin ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ highway twining fingers mine. =========================== Oh me girlie...(ykikykik!!!!!!!) My turn to clean the mirrors, right?  *sigh*  Cant believe you need me, never thought I would be needed for anything. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, A delicious breakfast of scrambled eggs. Love it. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
icecream and the color brown ~*~ Maybe it's just me... but I'm reaching for the Kleenex |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
as you were saying? (YAY!) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes..I too need a kleenex... Gawd girlie...you have such talent! Hugs YOU! ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling and battin' eyelashes at bri... I was wondering if you'd recognize your own words! gigglegleeeeeeeeeeeee forgive me? and as an explanation for the rest of you, I had owed our bri a duet for sometime--so... wince and nod I gathered these beautiful phrases from a collection I keep of brian's beautiful phrasings, and yep, much of this belongs to and was inspired by him.  (I wuz just playin' baby. Forgive me?)  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Back here for another read... and you're both Gorgeous, Brian and Karen..what a collaboration Mxx What are you my god? You touch me like you are my god |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think you're both wonderful! You were teasing us, little girl... thank you for this great gift! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Brian & Karen!! BRAVA! Had to come back when I saw it was the both of you!! WOW!!...please us again soon okay? |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
no wincing... you... GOT ME blushing like a sunset ...little coyote smmmile |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
brian and Karen You touched my heart ...thank you for letting us see the inimacy.  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Fantastic collective talents. believe in what your heart feels... |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
loved it all but this...this is breath "you are the closest thing to the inside of my skin" |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
to you two, I loved it all. Now, awaiting another such beauty! Sadie |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
missed these |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Karen & Brian -- this was a delight to read! to you both |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
The words from both pens sing a wonderful tune....well done... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
I tried to pick out my favorite lines but that would be the whole darn poem! Wonderful work, very seemlessly woven -- you cannot tell which one of you wrote what. Corinne |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
serenity, ( please excuse the abbreviation) . Once again, you have turned my concepts of poetry to a different direction. For the time being, I choose not to explore this chism between what I write, and what I truly am. All pretentiousness aside, I envy your voice. Doc |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I wanted to extend my gratitude for all of this generosity. Brian & I think so much alike that usually the only problem we have is saying the same thing at the same time! So thanks and kisses to my deliciously talented madviking, and to all of you for the yummy "feel goods". I do love this place. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well all I can do after reading this is just smile a lot. You and Bri truly are worth cloning |
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