Open Poetry #32 |
Bite The Hand That Feeds |
Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Bite The Hand That Feeds everyday we give another bite from our loaf to the oaf who is lazy-- takes his car to go next door, makes his wife walk to work, brags about things he says he owns-- while his woman slaves for things they'll never own. our taxes don't go to feed the poor-- not when he's drinkin' scotch in Muskogee not when he's collectin' monthly pogy not when he's smokin' a rich man's stogy. we all live each new dawn posted on the same 24 hour billboard... but that's where similarities end. ©2004 Grover Gall |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Hey Grover, do I sense a little frusty here? Enjoyed. wayne If nothing is something |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Just plain inspired writing, Wayne. Nothing in my personal life at all. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
It bites when a piece of our communal loaf goes to a lazy oaf! Felt your frustration in handouts being given so freely to the undeserving! EA |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Very good... indeed Grover. Thank for your words of sweet poetry. Bon-Bon wave: |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Grover, I understand perfectly... Well expressed writing. Sadelite |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
yes, yes, im glad you said it... enjoyed this |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
straight forward and straight up good write |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You speaketh the truth, Grover! |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Grover, Enjoyed this....keep it up! ~Laura~ |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!! Eric |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
we all live each new dawn posted on the same 24 hour billboard... but that's where similarities end. Tremendous!!!! Just put me up on that Billboard with George Cloony, who care bout similarities! hehehehehe |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
brillant as yours always are. strangle ive been having thoughts on same subject. my significant other seems to base his self worth with cash. even over another human life. so sad people loose site to priorities in life. loved it |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I agree with all the above replies! Brilliant write! JL |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
interesting read |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well said Grover. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
wisely said.... ~~**~~ |
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