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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2004-02-11 08:22 PM

Precarious, the balance between
love or lust, as fevered thoughts
simmer the stews below the
peak of passion’s rise.

Heavenly, the wind blown blush,
so ravenously absorbed...as eyes
sponge...absorbing...

Lustrous, blue skies painted by the
mirror of delicate puffs, awaiting
a gentle breath, that they might
sail.

And below....twirling, revolving, resting
upon a tender point....my heart,
awaiting the ball, that each dance
might be....could be...will be...

Ours....ours alone...

Forever...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-02-11 08:36 PM

A heart's blush
in whisper mode.

Well done, Sir.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2004-02-11 09:58 PM

Thoughts beautifully expressed. Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2004-02-11 10:16 PM

(sigh) Oh Barry, this is wonderful, sweet friend, yay, God Bless You, may you have the happiest Valentines Day and may each day feel just like the holiday, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

4 posted 2004-02-11 10:49 PM

Magnus...Very beautiful love poem with outstanding imagery. You tenderly weave emotion into each thought in this beautiful poem. ***Ivy Rose

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-02-11 10:58 PM

Perfectly penned Barry....
Would make a lovely Valentine.

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

6 posted 2004-02-12 03:52 AM

Magnus
Very Romantic poem....excellent arrangement of words...Clear yet mysterious, the way this subject should be handled in my opinion.
enjoyed..
_______ice
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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-02-12 03:54 AM

shwooooooosh!

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

8 posted 2004-02-12 04:47 AM

Happy Valentines Day!

~ARH

love and hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

9 posted 2004-02-12 11:20 AM

"Precarious, the balance between
love or lust"

Yes and that is what makes it so much fun...

Barry, as always,

I enjoyed.

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

10 posted 2004-02-12 12:27 PM

You choose each word with such care and precision. Great write!

Eric

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2004-03-22 04:55 AM

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

12 posted 2004-03-22 09:36 AM

Hi, looks like you wrote this awhile ago. But it works for this month too. ALways enjoy your words.
Sandra

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