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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Index The index of my smile is slack It’s lost its way by added track The folds upon my face have grown Like fields the farmer plowed and sown When shown it’s almost lost its view Among the craggy cracks that grew Along with visions dim of day That makes for gray upon my way And birds are further from my hear Or perhaps I’ve lost my ear But things are not the same for sure It seems to me they’ve lost their lure It seems no rush to where I go I’ve hung my hoe it’s just for show And now I can but style a wile And file them for a future while. The paddle wheels are slow abeam I need to dream, a head of steam. |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Smile Just continue the dream, though i have to say the folds in the face only makes the smile more pretty. Smile Jes |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very reflective morning write Sy. And in your pic you look pretty good to me!  ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~ I like not only to be loved, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nah...the smile is there... but as for the hearing? Mine is going too, Sy...sporadically. Will this then allow us only to hear what we want?   |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sy, I've asked the birds to sing louder. The rest is up to you. Well done!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, Seymour dear friend, not to worry. As long as you have Randy with you, anything is possible....even a trip to yesterday! Here, have a cinnamon roll with your tea. Sweets always make me feel better! hugs, Chris"At one glance |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I can tell, but the writing is coming through everso loud and clear and that's good -- so don't worry....be happy...like the song says. Life would be pretty boring if things always stayed the same (trite, I know). |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thought-provoking today...makes me look into myself a little bit |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi seymour,  Seems to me that you "hear" just fine, my friend.... you hear what matters, from the heart.  Hugs  Ethel |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Dream on, sweet friend... *S* We'll listen. *S* |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a very good lesson posted and written for all of us to seep our own message from...brilliant Sy...thank you for sharing. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you may have "hung your hoe" but your pen sure aint just for show. And those aint craggy cracks...they are character lines. Dont make me fuss at you bout calling yourself old!! I'll have to send Randy back to get you fired up!!lol  The work of language deserves our greatest care ... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, you fooled me, Sy. I always thought you HAD a head of steam!! Know what you mean, pardner. Takes me 4 minutes to cook a three minute egg these days!  Hang in there....  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy I've been thinking along those lines myself... make room for me. |
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Waterbirdfly Junior Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 32China |
Great£¡ |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
The index of my smile is slack It’s lost its way by added track The folds upon my face have grown Like fields the farmer plowed and sown Sy, The nice thing about a field plowed and sown is that a great harvest is shared with many. You abundantly share and are well loved here. BTW, I really liked your poem. Sadelite |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all my wonderful friends, I thank you much. My time is not my own lately and since I do move slower it does take more time. I realy do appreciate all your comments. They are like a head of steam that keeps me going. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, you have so many blessings paraphrased in each smile from the upper lip index, sweet friend, God Bless You, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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