Open Poetry #31 |
Still Wishing That I Knew |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Still Wishing That I Knew The strength you gave me Will now help me through Something as gone wrong I'm still wishing that I knew Everyone as their reasons In doing whatever they do What could be your motive I'm still wishing that I knew I'm finding it hard to forget Maybe it was easy for you Are goodbyes often silent I'm still wishing that I knew I know something is wrong Yet I am left without a clue I know silence as a reason I'm still wishing that I knew HopeĀ©2004 |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Smile Only time will let the mind and heart forget the questions we never got an answer to. Smile Jes |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Jes , yes only time will tell , I do know something as gone wrong , but perhaps I will never know what Hope |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
What an unfortunate way to end something like this. No answers, maybe a clue or two, and probably of lots of second guessing. I wish you knew too Hope. No one should have to go through that... Especially you... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
HopeS All answers are subjective so take it from there. Good write, enjoyed. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Richy , yes I seem to be writing about this same issue a lot recently , but he as never been silent for this long before Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Seymour , I can only hope the answers will come soon Hope |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Tides of silence -- so loud the roar! I understanding (read my Pirate poem below to see). Sad lovely writing. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I"ll go find him and smack him around if you need me to |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hey thanks for the offer Dixie , yes you could get to Oregon much quicker than I could Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you iliana , yes the silence can be both painful and frustrating , its the longest he as been silent in 7 years , kinda as me worried Hope |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Hope, I just wanted to wish you a wonderful Valentines Day! Take great care! Richy |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Richy , that was so sweet of you, I hope your day is special too Hope |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
HopeS - time will let you know, in time... BC |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Bill for your caring thought in reply .... I did write a poem after this one with the outcome of my wishing , yes it was worth the wait ... the poems that slipped by was " Far Away , Yet Close Enough /pip/Forum88/HTML/001022.html Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Richy , yes my wishes were answered , I wrote the following poem /pip/Forum88/HTML/001022.html Somehow this poem is still hanging around and the follow up slippped by Hope |
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