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Death
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since 2001-05-26

Posts 112
Twilight

0 posted 2004-02-11 04:58 AM

It's what you ALL want
  yet as you see seek unfortunately
     we are all much much too scared
       to simply step up from the chair

Let alone come close enough
  to taste the scent intimate
    actually touch a hand hold it
      fear of piercing heart restrains

Oh the band discouraged yet never
  releasing the hold on the love and hope
    contained in every PausePulse plays on and
      on entreating every sound to break down walls

Surrounding each who claims to want Love and to be
  so dance one inch closer music wordless sings lead
    songs rending truths die of whithered heart dry
      or let the blood flow fall into every unknown

Your heart will end you whichever yet MusicMagic
  the sweat of passion pours from every horn
    get out on the floor high dive swan dive how
       many know an air so rare lungs burst to taste

An air so rare so sweet the body bends in ecstacy
  trying to weep bending falling sidewards floating
    dreams becoming THE ONLY REALITY music comes
     suddenly as all things UNSEEN only crying sweet

While you rejoice in the bleeding of that pierced
   heart while even in your dreams the musicians
     smile exhaustedly as they play in a rapture
       pure passion while you find that HeartsBlood

Is the SweetestGivingTakingLossGainYouEverKnew
  steals your breath away unspeaking words fail
    as there is no pause while the band plays on
     the deadly dance no person can be alive without

"Sooner or later, Death makes a believer out of just about everyone."

[This message has been edited by Death (02-11-2004 05:53 AM).]

Jes
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since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

1 posted 2004-02-11 08:18 AM

Smile to death ---> thought of taht as i saw ya name first time in here cause i always smile.

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Is the SweetestGivingTakingLossGainYouEverKnew
  steals your breath away unspeaking words fail
    as there is no pause while the band plays on
     the deadly dance no person can be alive without

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And so the story goes on and on, i liked it.

Smile

Jes

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-02-11 09:06 AM

Let alone come close enough
  to taste the scent intimate
    actually touch a hand hold it
      fear of piercing heart restrains

~*~

It's been awhile.  We've missed your thoughts, and ponderings.  Now, please...stay...and play the heartstrings of the poets, for you do it so well!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2004-02-11 09:26 AM

Death
Interesting read, enjoyed.

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2004-02-11 10:10 AM

Well done! Enjoyed much. Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-02-11 11:13 AM

A big W O W! This is an awesome write!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-02-11 12:52 PM

yes, it's been awhile. Do stay.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2004-02-20 04:09 PM

"Is the SweetestGivingTakingLossGainYouEverKnew"

That's for sure!

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

8 posted 2004-02-21 12:02 PM

Terrific! Such passion in your writing!
Sadelite

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

9 posted 2004-02-21 08:44 AM

Acrostic headed thy way

Where indeed
  Hoping no such place exists
    Ye find all in everything together tossed

Not I guess twould make a difference
  Only who really wants the refuse pile
    Toiling midst a million years of Why Not

IT was very thoughtful of you to plant this on my post.  Come to think of it, under some of the gloom, there was some light: some people do go through landfills and refuse piles to find lost treasures!  I liked your acrostic!
                 Thanks, Sadelite

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

10 posted 2004-02-21 05:48 PM

An interesting read indeed.
enjoyed

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2004-02-21 05:54 PM

Loved this!! Oh yes!!
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~

wordwizard
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since 2003-09-08

Posts 483
on the way to next world

12 posted 2004-02-21 07:07 PM

now I might be influenced by your pseudo...or maybe not,as I read of this deadly dance and imagine how many have been put to trance

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

13 posted 2004-02-21 07:07 PM

enjoyed

Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

14 posted 2004-02-21 08:11 PM

damn fine work here..

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

15 posted 2004-02-21 10:04 PM

It is true that dying is easy; it is living that is hard.

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