Open Poetry #31 |
FIRST KISS |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
FIRST KISS (A Candy Heart Poem) By: Noah Eaton 2/16/01 A first kiss Is the most magical gift of all The moment I touched your lips The heavens pour out, down into your heart I fall You gave me my first kiss Sharing it with you, when our hearts first touched Heartstrings softly twitching, like the flick of a light switch Feeling your love for the first time, wanting to forever love you so much I think all the time about that first kiss Holding you close, watching sparks fly feeling your warm breaths and sighs And a sour lips were touching, I moaned my happiest wish We would always be together, two true lovers for all time I'll never forget that first kiss You, my love, have given me the happiest feeling I've ever had From your lovely ruby lips, you gave me, my first kiss And with you, my love, it will never be the last! "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
you deserve all the kisses and hugs in the world for being the sweetest person... this is a lovely poem and the pictures go so well with it! gorgeous! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"I think all the time about that first kiss Holding you close, watching sparks fly feeling your warm breaths and sighs And a sour lips were touching, I moaned my happiest wish We would always be together, two true lovers for all time" Well, my angel Noah, you have sent me back to my childhood tonight, sweet one! hugs.....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awwwww Noah...this is adorable! |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Ahhhhhhhh sigggghhhh..... I smiled first as i saw the picture of the two kids, i actually laughed abit. But as i read the poem i got red cheeks after it it touched me with such warmth. Thank you noah taht was a smile and a read worth, i loved it. Smile Jes |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, how precious is this?!! Valentine hugs and kisses to you sweet Noah. Chris |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderful Noah!! There is nothing quite like that first kiss!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Noah Very nice and so timely... Vanentine season reminds of happenings such as these..... enjoyed ________ice ><> |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
AWWWWWWW, this is so cute and sweet, Noah. Something all remember, I'm sure. Hugs Ethel |
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