Open Poetry #31 |
Mist |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Mist uncertainty shadows light glimmers of reality stepping through the fog of daily living relying on faith alone to protect me from my steps hoping for whispers of guidance groping for a stronghold grasping at known promises heard too long ago slipping falling landing safely in His omnipresence still a tiny flutter in my heart praying for a resting of my spirit as I turn my eyes my hope my love upon Him pleading for mercy for my weakness my unbelief my fear a tear is it mine? is it His? “Child, rest, I AM here.” ©February 10, 2004 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very, very good! Grover. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
a tear is it mine? is it His? “Child, rest, I AM here.” very soft and gentle write. enjoyed. Chris "At one glance |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Lovely, lovely, VAS. The tear is yours and it is HIS. Wow, I really like this one. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
ahhh...the inextricably intertwined essence of that single tear...with the comforting knowledge that it (as well as He) is indeed there |
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