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You Look Good in Wind
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You Look Good in Wind |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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He said, "you look good in wind," and now, whenever the wind blows I feel his hands in my hair. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It always takes a special person to make certain words a memory. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PrettySis~ This just has love blown all over it~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Catchy and original! Grover. |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
wow.. that's so sweet. I liked the way you put this. So simple and sweet. A really nice memory. |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Ye do lass, and that's the truth. I envy any fellow who took the chance to tell ye so. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
hmmm...even slight and semi-constant, the wind...to be ever reminded...nice write |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
This is great poetic imagery! *smile* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH WOW!!!! Martie...this is SO beautiful!! Kiss the man who said that!!  Hugs to you sweet lady~ ~ I like not only to be loved, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Martie, this is so full of heart and love, and I LOVE it. Hugs Ethel |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
And I thought you were writing about me at the Scottish festival when my kilt blows up and I don't wear anything under it.....but, nice write gal... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
It's a beautiful image Martie.  M Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Martie..... you look good period... |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Very cool for a short write Martie. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely little slice...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Marti, this is special! Wow, I felt love. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and I heard youre a hottie in flannel too. love this succinct sweetie of a write.  The work of language deserves our greatest care ... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Martie, I just had to pull you up here and wish you and yours, a Happy Valentines Day! Richy |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
This is a little raindrop, sent straight from heaven. What a lovely little read. Such a tiny write, but you know what they say...you never see a Big Diamond!! .. or something like that.  ^*Kim*^ (Ahem...ickle Kim!) P.S Happy valentines day |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
says a lot this short poem - mind what you say - it may last a long time...loved it Paul |
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