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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2004-02-10 02:26 PM



Strawberry Of Moon

~*Marge Tindal*~
ð
¤¤¤¤
礤¤•••¤¤¤ç
çStrawberry moonç
across a Milky Way sky
Spooning with moonbeams
upona whipofcream sigh
Shortcake of dreams piled so high
scrumptious delight in the night sky
Melt-in-the-mindflavor so veryappealing
Strawberry moon so very revealing
Once in yearly phasing she will come
nothing in February sky left undone
Celestial dessert in crystal of dish
might be time to make a wish
Strawberry moon come again
Creme dela Creme


A little *Strawberry Shortcake* for RatLeader
Repost ... but guaranteed FRESH~


~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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1 posted 2004-02-10 02:29 PM


well, I for one never saw the first one...so I am glad to see first helpings...nicely done
LeeJ
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2 posted 2004-02-10 02:35 PM


I'd like a serving of that Strawberry moon if you wouldn't mind?  A terrific read and write Margie.  Thank you for sharing.
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3 posted 2004-02-10 02:43 PM


Great [and tasty] concrete poem! Grover.
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4 posted 2004-02-10 03:01 PM


Woo-hoo! Sweet! Nothing like those dainty pink nubbins to sweeten up your day ...or night....

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
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5 posted 2004-02-10 03:33 PM


Beautiful Marge!!  Love this...I do...I do.
Hugs~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~
                
            

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6 posted 2004-02-10 08:12 PM


Marge/sis....Tasty and low cal...what more could you want.  
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7 posted 2004-02-10 08:23 PM


And Marge, this was your Creme dela Creme!  I loved it!  ........ ........jo
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8 posted 2004-02-10 08:33 PM


ok, ive never broken my diet with a poem before!!
this is delicious..

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9 posted 2004-02-11 01:45 PM


Delightful! *S*
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10 posted 2004-02-11 11:01 PM


Marge great picture poem. A Strawberry Moon sounds scrumptous. Your imagery was delightful and flavorful. ***Ivy Rose
Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2005-06-13 10:34 AM





A little *bumpology*
with no apology ...
Just cause it's time
for some strawberries sublime~

Thankee to all for sharing~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

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