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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2004-02-10 02:26 PM



Strawberry Of Moon

~*Marge Tindal*~
ð
¤¤¤¤
礤¤•••¤¤¤ç
çStrawberry moonç
across• a Milky Way• sky
Spooning • with • moonbeams
upon • a whip • of • cream • sigh
Shortcake • of dreams • piled so high
scrumptious • delight in • the night • sky
Melt-in-the-mind•flavor so very•appealing
Strawberry • moon • so • very • revealing
Once • in yearly phasing • she will • come
nothing • in •February sky• left • undone
Celestial• dessert in crystal • of dish
might • be time to make a • wish
Strawberry moon come again
•Creme dela Creme•


A little *Strawberry Shortcake* for RatLeader
Repost ... but guaranteed FRESH~


~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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1 posted 2004-02-10 02:29 PM


well, I for one never saw the first one...so I am glad to see first helpings...nicely done
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2 posted 2004-02-10 02:35 PM


I'd like a serving of that Strawberry moon if you wouldn't mind?  A terrific read and write Margie.  Thank you for sharing.
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3 posted 2004-02-10 02:43 PM


Great [and tasty] concrete poem! Grover.
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4 posted 2004-02-10 03:01 PM


Woo-hoo! Sweet! Nothing like those dainty pink nubbins to sweeten up your day ...or night....

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
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5 posted 2004-02-10 03:33 PM


Beautiful Marge!!  Love this...I do...I do.
Hugs~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~
                
            

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6 posted 2004-02-10 08:12 PM


Marge/sis....Tasty and low cal...what more could you want.  
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7 posted 2004-02-10 08:23 PM


And Marge, this was your Creme dela Creme!  I loved it!  ........ ........jo
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8 posted 2004-02-10 08:33 PM


ok, ive never broken my diet with a poem before!!
this is delicious..

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9 posted 2004-02-11 01:45 PM


Delightful! *S*
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10 posted 2004-02-11 11:01 PM


Marge great picture poem. A Strawberry Moon sounds scrumptous. Your imagery was delightful and flavorful. ***Ivy Rose
Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2005-06-13 10:34 AM





A little *bumpology*
with no apology ...
Just cause it's time
for some strawberries sublime~

Thankee to all for sharing~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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