Open Poetry #31 |
For Jack 1954- 2004( In Rememberance) |
froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Once so alive, now all is still and quiet and only memories will I have. The memories of... Tuesday night skating, toboggan rides,passing notes in Sunday school. Telling jokes,sharing laughs as well as long talks. We always had a lot of fun you and I. Sunday you went home to Heaven above. I'm going to miss you my friend. |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hi froggy...this is so sad. You made me tear up reading it. I should have known by the title it was going to tug at my heart. Well done dear friend. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Thank-you EvocativeVerse2. Jack was a good friend, cousin. :-) |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hey froggy what are you doing up at 1:45 AM your time? Shouldn't you be asleep? Zzz! |
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Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
and that makes me wonder if YOU should be asleep, too, EV. lol |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Froggy, I'm so sorry for your loss. ...hugs, jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
my heart goes out to you |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Froggy A lot can be said for brevity, Except when it comes to life. What we need to see in others Are very long poems Like Poes Raven, that goes on and on And not some shortened verse That seems to end before its time. I am glad you wrote this, it will help with healing. Ford |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Froggy~ Such loving thoughts for so great a loss~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Thank-you all for the nice comments. I needed to write this in order for the hurt to start healing. |
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