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Open Poetry #31

Haiku in Senyru

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2004-01-25 08:15 PM

Haiku in Senyru

haiku, what’s with you?
are your syllables flying
count your blessings, friend

©January 25, 2004

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2004-01-25 08:43 PM

Oh Vas...
I love this...it twinkled with beautiful eyes. TD

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

2 posted 2004-01-25 09:12 PM

I've pondered the same thing...hahaha! Cute!

McLean

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2004-02-15 03:03 PM

Virginia, I like this!!
It's a new twist.

Hugs

Ethel

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2004-02-15 03:08 PM

VAS
Good one, enjoyed.

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

5 posted 2004-02-15 03:11 PM

Cool! Grover.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2004-02-15 11:24 PM

Brings smile to face,
words of subtle meaning placed,
beautiful in grace!

Obviously, enjoyed your writing!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2004-02-15 11:41 PM

counting to 5, take away two as I type~

Neat poem VAS~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-02-16 03:25 AM

cute write

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