I Can No More Dispute My Love

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Open Poetry #31

I Can No More Dispute My Love

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

0 posted 2004-02-09 01:22 PM

I Can No More Dispute My Love

The potency of a kismet
hitherto unknown I perceive.
A breath stealing subtlety that
pleads for the touch of a lover.
Ambiguous motifs bind us.
Ascending necessity builds.
Like the petals of a flower
are the presses of your lips...soft,
redolent, and longed for. Let me
inhale anew the fragrance of
your locks. Let mine eyes be betrothed
to yours. This risqué wantonness
goes through hackneyed prerequisites.
I can no more dispute my love.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2004-02-09 01:36 PM

Kevin, that sounds urgent!! LOL
Good writing, Sir.

Hugs

Ethel

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2004-02-09 04:31 PM

Nice writing...James

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

3 posted 2004-02-09 04:36 PM

Kevin your word usage and strength in the structure of your lines is just fantastic. I really could feel this one.. and I liked it a lot!! :-D well done!

snow

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

4 posted 2004-02-10 01:24 AM

Such sweet words to read after 8 hours at work.

Kevin (Shakespeare),
You have that magic touch that always brings
a smile to my face.
I love this one.

Ribbits and Ribbits

:-)

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-02-10 03:17 AM

oooooooohhh yes

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