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Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2004-02-08 04:53 PM

We grew apart
and in the end
We'll blame the world
for our mistakes.

For every star
I will see your face
fading in the sky

For every river
forever you'll be
when you go away

Like the sun's
burning heart
in the sky

You will forget me
I will fade away
in your memories

And for every tear
that floods my tired heart.
I will remember you.

-Juju

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2004-02-08 05:19 PM

I really like this one. It has lots
of feelings in it.

Hugs

Ethel

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

2 posted 2004-02-08 05:52 PM

Very well written! Grover.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2004-02-08 07:04 PM

(big angel hugs) Oh Juju, this is so very heartfelt, sweet friend, may loves true emotions touch your heart always, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Juju, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-02-08 07:13 PM

Very nicely written indeed.
Congrats on becoming a full Member.
Hugs~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2004-02-09 04:10 PM

Lovely...James

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

6 posted 2004-02-10 12:00 PM

Thank you very much! (:

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-02-10 04:27 AM

bittersweet...excellent!

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

8 posted 2004-02-10 07:41 PM

Thank you.

Personally I did a poor job at organizing it, but it still works (:

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

9 posted 2004-03-03 05:43 PM

Juju, this was very well written -- I liked the verse about the sun's burning heart.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

10 posted 2004-03-03 06:07 PM

Thank you! (Smiles)

-Juju

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