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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-02-08 03:13 PM

risque chemistry

plummetless paths
and mystical points
breath taking finesse
of a magician's delusion
an utterance of doves
in blazing departure
escaping to flight
from the illusionists hat

the effectiveness not known previously
or anticipated with a touch
ascending heights
glistening majestic mountains
rising above the clouds
convulsive gyrated molecules
creating a turbulent risque chemistry

the mesmerized sippings
that go beyond normal limitations
propelling earth's atmosphere
as rockets ingress galaxies unknown
phenomenal vivid inflorescence
that rises from
divinity's prairie
with a colorful brilliance
escaping through ... a kiss

©Snow

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2004-02-09 12:41 PM

I can not believe this has gone sight unseen....

Snow you are simply amazing and I? complete awe of your words and talent....I keep this along with many to re read.....AMAZING!!

~~**~~
You read before you words I write-
See before you my soul,
spinning on waves of thought,
painting memories of time

Kristin Eve
Member

since 2004-01-13

Posts 89
On, Canada

2 posted 2004-02-09 01:13 AM

this poem is wonderful.

"By the time you finish reading this...
You will have finished readding this"

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-02-09 03:34 AM

wow! Incredible!

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

4 posted 2004-02-09 10:34 AM

Okay this is simply exquisite. I really love this line...the mesmerized sippings
that go beyond normal limitations propelling earth's atmosphere as rockets ingress galaxies unknown phenomenal vivid inflorescence that rises from divinity's prairie with a colorful brilliance escaping through ... a kiss. Yes That says it all. This is an excellent piece of writing Snow. Bravo!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

5 posted 2004-02-09 03:14 PM

Snowy, I love your subtlety

It leaves a trail of desire, from the mind...
straight through, to the heart

I think we might have to change
your name though, to something
that might better reflect your
essence...

Something easy like...

White Hot Passion Of A Thousand Suns!

You know... something nice and simple like that... ? ...

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

6 posted 2004-02-18 01:52 AM

ascending heights
glistening majestic mountains
rising above the clouds
convulsive gyrated molecules
creating a turbulent risque chemistry

i have seen this , you are flowing with the winds on this one .... your words spin spools of reflection ....a natural passion in poetry ....

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