Open Poetry #31 |
Nurture |
DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Senuousness Electric wireless vibrating By sounds, eyes, body movement, relief, fear Sleeping awake in relaxation No No dreams Pleasure Memories Awake in a low level of vibration From the depths vision in flicks of electric Moans a tempest Lights of a tempest lamp Overflowing with spirit Lighted carefully And watched For nurture |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Sensualness, indeed! Grover. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
DavePage Good metaphors, enjoyed. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You have a way of capturing the atmosphere of special moments. It's as if you picked out the juiciest ones from a wide palette of thoughts twirling in your head. Very good. Love, Margherita |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thank you for your comments I value them It is a magic of lust or love for a moment writes it's own poem of desire And thanks love Dave |
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