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Torch Song #6
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Torch Song #6 |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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I never wanted to claim you chain you confine you or contain you how could i when your colors ride gloriously as the sparrow's upon the morning's rise just to know that you are there for me if only to conjure you in those moments when faith dangles uncertain, as the last leaves of auturmn spinning on a sigh and feel you close if only thru your aura on intuition's call and maybe on occasion when i grow wings on pure imagination to gently touch alongside you as you welcome me my freebird to share your open sky [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (02-10-2004 06:42 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
... to share your open sky No, we can't chain love! Wonderfully written and wise .... but in truth do we need others to fly high? We should not, but then reality tells us .... well! Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Youngatheart Member
since 2003-12-30
Posts 333 |
I love this part: and maybe on occasion when i grow wings on pure imagaination It IS hard not to cling to those we love. Bravo! super poem. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh my  this is sad but so beautiful...so beautiful...as you |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"when i grow wings on pure imagination to gently touch alongside you as you welcome me my freebird to share your open sky" Absolutely beautiful Michele..bittersweet write. Very much enjoyed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ I like not only to be loved, |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
A waste of time obsessing over what you cant have. Move on! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for reading bboy  |
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LiquidMidnight Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 50 |
You stole my idea; I was going to title a poem "Torch Song".  :Pto claim you chain you I love this rhyme. I also love how you took a cliche them (a bird) and put it in a noncliche context. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
That was really sweet Inkedgoddess He must be quite a guy Very lovely! As far as for you bklynboy, I think that your comment was rude, and totally uncalled for. That is not how you treat a lady, or anyone for that matter. And I think you owe Inkedgoddess a sincere apology, at the very least. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Inked -- took my breath away! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thank you richy, i am moved by your chivalry, bboy and i have discussed this, thanks |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
richy.... your reply was inappropriate. I have nothing but been supportive of the works of the inked one. She knows when I dont like something she has done,cause I will tell. When she writes something I like, I tell her as well. If you dont like my replies,,,,tough! You can kiss my......well you get the idea or maybe you dont....I really dont give a rats bottom |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
and maybe on occasion when i grow wings on pure imagination to gently touch alongside you I do so love your free spirit girlielocks~ You know I do!! Happy Hearts Day, yada, yada, yada~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
and a hearty one to u 2 girliegirl |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Michele - yes, you say it well... |
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