Open Poetry #31 |
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Tie a Ribbon |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla ![]() |
Tie a Ribbon Who’ll tie a ribbon on shadows pall? Dance the beacon of moonlights crawl Stand and gather the senses grace And wear the mantle of its lace. Catch horizons on the fly Cut the Gordian knot of tie Stare into the omni view Call upon the inner you. Could you walk a rainbows path? Wave the acid of your bath Set you free a snow white dove Give a rose unto your love? It’s all within a point of view Within this earth there’s nothing new Your Swiftly passing mound of grime Dissolving in the round of time. Be you happy in or out Be you both, than you are stout. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, dear Seymour, I was just looking for you when you "popped" in. And with what a wondrous poem! This is a keeper! I love every word of it. Just great. Love and Joy. Margherita ![]() |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Seems you UNtied the ribbon on a whole new year before you, Sy! What a great way to look into what is yet before you! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sy you show us the rainbow path each day. Thank you. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You are one amazing gentleman poet~ So blessed I feel to read these little gems from your pen~ Thank you~ ![]() *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy you are so amazing.... And I hope you had a wonderful birthday! ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~ I like not only to be loved, |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Thank you for the uplift of this, dear...I needed it! I hope your birthday was a delight, like you are. ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
made me smile today |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank You Sy, yet another well crafted thinker you have given us to ponder. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, this is amazing!! I was going to copy my favorite lines, but I would have done the whole thing. ![]() Hugs, ![]() Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita Thank you sweety. Sunshine Love you too. scorpio Thank you my friend. Marge, You are a love. Nancy, Love you too Martie From one delight to another? ![]() passing, A smile is a smile. Magnus My friend Barry. Ethel, Hugs back, ![]() |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Wow, Sy...lots to think about with this one! Thank you! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It’s all within a point of view Within this earth there’s nothing new But it can still be seen with fresh eyes... and even seeing someone see it so brings renewal. *S* Beautiful work, my friend... I hope your birthday was a wonderful one! |
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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
Brightened a dull day at school quite nicely. Enjoyed. -Rdz One in a sea of millions has the power to change the world... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
jaicie114 Enjoyed your comment, thank you. suthern Thank you sweet, I did have a nice birthday. Rdz9 So glad it bright your day. |
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