Open Poetry #31 |
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Your Gentle Breath |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Your Gentle Breath While lost in dreams, your soothing voice Is clear, As eagerly I turn and reach for you. Your gentle breaths are music to my ear, And with a touch my passions burn anew. I take you in my arms, I kiss your cheek, You sigh a tender sigh and welcome me. Then loving hard we find the bliss we seek, Sequestered in our secret ecstasy. That every day I first might see your face, Would be my deepest hope, my true desire. Awakened to your fond and soft embrace, I’m slowly warmed by love’s rekindled fire. To lie along your side I’ll ever wait, And dream of what our love may soon create. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
I really enjoyed this poem! Grover. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
So wonderful to read your work. Perfection of form, as usual and oh, such a tender topic, beautifully expressed Liz |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is such a beautiful pillow talk poem, sweet friend, I imagine this ever so much too as when we hold our dreams true we can always imagine love being there, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet David, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! very romantic! just in time for Valentine's Day |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
i liked the whole poem...very sensual… but this line… "Sequestered in our secret ecstasy." is exquisite…h |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
you do have this poetry stuff down. good write. |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read ![]() |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
David~ It is SO good to read you~ Lovely, lovely versing ... as always~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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