Open Poetry #31 |
Misspelled Senryu?(a personal reflection) |
Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sad win paper's line supersedes the depth and thoughts of feelings unpinned. [This message has been edited by Sadelite (02-06-2004 09:59 PM).] |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
whoops, to anybody who may have read this before, "Sorry, I forgot how to count!" Big whoops |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwww, this is such a wonderful senryu effort, sweet friend, you spelt and did it just right, yay! (angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a most crystal clear reflection of the essential you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sadelite, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
C -- I liked! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Well, give or take whatever you were supposed to put in, or take out? I liked it! Kinda reminded me of Carolina Panthers last sunday... Thanks Sadelite! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
iliana, Glad you liked it-- I wish the words would have been true homophones, but they are commonly misspelled and pronounced by people around where I live anyway so I used them anyway. Richy, My little puzzle poem may not have been clear. If not, it's all in the I's. It works without translating, but when I originally thought the poem up, it was with a different spelling and meaning. Now I like the wrong spelling and meaning more because it supports the other one. Thank you for your helpful and positive comment. I appreciate it. Sadelite |
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