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Open Poetry #31

The Milk Of Love

harash
Member

since 2003-12-27

Posts 99
India

0 posted 2004-02-06 11:33 AM

The Milk Of Love

Let us enjoy
The milk of love;
Doesn’t matter
Whosoever comes and serves.
The pages we write
In love we play,
Each moment we enjoy
With them we stay.
Every reveling moment pushes us
To the extreme of ecstasy;
We can’t even dare
To withdraw ourselves
From this known fantasy.
Death or lunacy
Sometimes
The result at last,
Love is here
To engulf
The lovers very fast.

~~~~*HARASH MAHAJAN*©~~~~

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

1 posted 2004-02-06 12:11 PM

harash,
I was with you right until the end, and there, I played with the word "fast", wondering how this would read if one would interpret "fast" to mean" to fast" from milk or nourishment. I liked the way you wrote it! Much enjoyed.
Sadelite

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-02-06 12:51 PM

Harash, I enjoyed this!

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

3 posted 2004-02-06 03:28 PM

very nice! I liked it very much

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

4 posted 2004-02-06 03:32 PM

Well written, much enjoyed! Grover.

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