Open Poetry #31 |
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Drinker Of Deeper Miles Written With ThisDiamond |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Swept in , a new star rises Sisterhood and good surprises A new star rises With good surprises Wept and known , as fortunes soul is shown one hand out, one hand clasped, the wider sighs unknown Sitting in the context of new skies As fortunes soul is shown Seeing in the wonder of new eyes The splendor of connection to revitalize A right hand is unknown With few of hopes of stars Yet right to right,a friendship sewn Tacking sparkles on the velvet sphere of Mars And good few miles to the new skies Seen side by side Of tomorrow's Dual enterprise |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very well done you two! you duet extremely well together... Please ...one more time!? ![]() ~Hugs to you both~ ~ I like not only to be loved, |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Both of you ladies did well with this... Nice blend, well done!! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
A wonderful blend of poetry. Much enjoyed! |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very nice. Grover. |
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muted![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
lovely lovely!! ![]() |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwww, I really love this gorgeous duet, sweet friends, you took us all on such a cosmic journey in this free-wheeling fantasy! (big angel hugs) God Bless You Both, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Vandana and Kathleen, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
PHEW! *wipes brow* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent! nice duet! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Vandana: Thank you so much for the opportunity to write with you. I enjoyed the journey. Thank you all for your kind replies. TD |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Wonderful waltzing you two~ |
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