Open Poetry #31 |
My Recall |
Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
My Recall By Larry Chadwick I found myself surprised last night, In the attic of my families past. Rustling through the memories, I hoped this time would last. There were things from long ago, That somehow I forgot. And things I could remember, A little different than I thought. Enjoying each recall, I lingered in the past. Refreshed, I woke to face today, And promised I would make it last. February 5, 2004 If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Make each new day count...that's the ticket...! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Larry Good one, I've done the same. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"There were things from long ago, That somehow I forgot. And things I could remember, A little different than I thought." Funny how that happens and you realize you miss something/someone that you thought you'd forgotten. Nice to see ya Larry... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Great one Larry! Much enjoyed this look back. Good to read you here m'friend. Hugs~Nancy Lee ~ I like not only to be loved, |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
Well-said. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Enjoying each recall, I lingered in the past. Refreshed, I woke to face today, And promised I would make it last. Yes, Larry, with our memories, we can make the day last, can't we? Hugs Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big angel hugs) This is beautiful, sweet friend, always hold your memories dear as they are bound to always be part of you, yay! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Kie Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 77USA |
Your poem was excellent. The rhyming & flow sounded perfect when I read it aloud. I commend you, this one is really good. Kie |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karilea, Thank you. I know you know... Sy, Thanks. It works pretty well, doesn't it? Thanks Dunc, Fond memories pleasantly revisited. Nancy Lee, Thank you dear lady. I miss it a lot! endlessecho, Thank you and nice to meet you. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Ethel, Thank you dear lady. And yes we can. Thanks Noah, I have and I will. Kie, Thank you and welcome to Passions. Looks like you'll fit right in here. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Anything that allows us to wake refreshed is welcomed... *S* I'm glad you enjoyed this recall, Larry... I certainly enjoyed the write! *S* |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Larry -- This was great! |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Really good poem! Grover. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhLarry~ I've been lost for hours and hours in those attics ... this is lovely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writings Larry...James |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I understand! heart hugsss I lie awake at night |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I hope the memories stayed with you today, Larry. Good to see you. M |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Hey there Larry! It's so good to see you again. I hope you are doing well. I enjoyed reading you poem. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Ruth, Thank you sweet friend. Iliana, You joined the day after my b'day! And welcome to PiPs. Thanks for the kind words. Grover, Welcome to PiPs and thanks for your generous response. Marge, I never refuse huglets. And I'm thrilled you know that attic so well. JM, You're the man. Always faithful and kind. Thanks. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, I know you do. And thank you for being such a loyal friend. & M, Yes they did. And thank you. I know you know the memories help too... Hugs: vandana, Thank you dear friend, always. Sue, Thanks and hope all is well with you too. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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