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Open Poetry #31
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MERCURY
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since 2003-04-16
Posts 190
Ireland
0 posted 2004-02-04 06:45 AM

I love the rain,

Her of perpetual sorrow,

Crying for tomorrow.

My troubles seem to drift away as I gaze at her beauty.

Before I grasped panicked gulps of air,

But,

Wathching this mesmerising spectacle of nature,

My breathing subsides into a finely tuned orchestra,

At one.
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nn
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 75
1 posted 2004-02-04 07:44 AM



Love this:
"I love the rain,

Her of perpetual sorrow,

Crying for tomorrow."
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2004-02-06 12:12 PM

This was really lovely writing.  .....jo
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