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choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

0 posted 2004-01-25 10:38 AM

moonlight
settles on the old stone wall;
softer than fresh snow.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2004-01-25 10:41 AM

choshi
And it's not as cold. LOL enjoyed.

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

2 posted 2004-01-25 10:51 AM

moonlight
settles on the old stone wall;
softer than fresh snow.

weary
stones sighing under burden
of resting moonbeams.

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

3 posted 2004-01-25 10:59 AM

Softer than the kleenex feel of newborn skin...

very soft, dear.

McLean

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2004-01-25 11:49 AM

Paul~
Pure melodic beauty in this Haiku~
Write the moon and I'm there~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2004-01-25 07:08 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is so Downy soft, sweet friend, I could imagine feeling the sunlight kiss my cheek reading this, yay, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2004-01-25 07:16 PM

choshi - on a full moon moonlit night, my favorite time...

BC

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

7 posted 2004-01-26 09:25 AM

moonlight
settles on the old stone wall;
softer than fresh snow.

weary
stones sighing under burden
of resting moonbeams.

where moonlight shines
soft respite for the weary;
freshly fallen snow.

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

8 posted 2004-01-26 09:26 AM

choshi
And it's not as cold. LOL enjoyed.

Or as warm: Thank you Sy...

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

9 posted 2004-01-26 09:27 AM

Softer than the kleenex feel of newborn skin...

very soft, dear.

McLean

Ahh, the softness of newborn skin...Thank you....~P

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

10 posted 2004-01-26 09:29 AM

Paul~
Pure melodic beauty in this Haiku~
Write the moon and I'm there~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

And, yes, in moonlight, you will find me there too...I wrote a string of haiku re: "moon" sometime ago and will post them when they can be found....~P

PS...I really enjoyed your integration of image and poem the other day...~P

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

11 posted 2004-01-26 09:31 AM

, I could imagine feeling the sunlight kiss my cheek reading this,

Nice Image and sensation, Noah....thank you ~P

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

12 posted 2004-01-26 09:31 AM

choshi - on a full moon moonlit night, my favorite time...

BC

Thank you Bill, Yes, so many phases of the moon so rich in meaning and feeling ~P

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

13 posted 2004-01-26 10:15 AM

Paul~

soft image of lovely light
and falling snow....beautiful!

I lie awake at night
I reach out to touch
Feel you by my side
I reach I never feel you
Will I ever get to feel you again
Just one more time

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

14 posted 2004-01-26 12:17 PM

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moonlight
settles on the old stone wall;
softer than fresh snow

moonlight bouncing
off the wall
caught in its glow
let's play in the snow

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

15 posted 2004-01-27 08:49 AM

Paul~

soft image of lovely light
and falling snow....beautiful!

Awww! Thank you Greeneyes.....~P

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

16 posted 2004-01-27 08:51 AM

moonlight bouncing
off the wall
caught in its glow
let's play in the snow

~~~~~~<@>~~~~~~

Playing:
nose tickled by snowflakes
in moonlight.

PazSqual
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 71

17 posted 2004-04-11 12:35 PM

This gave me such a calm feeling.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

18 posted 2004-04-11 12:37 PM

Paul, I really liked this one. You are such an artist! This painting was a real one for me!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

19 posted 2004-04-11 01:56 PM

old stone walls are good canvases

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

20 posted 2004-04-11 01:57 PM

Very nicely penned Paul..much enjoyed.
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

21 posted 2004-04-11 08:03 PM

enjoyed this much

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