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Snow

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since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-02-03 12:28 PM

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

1 posted 2004-02-03 12:51 PM

excellent write...loved it...seems like hope is always getting entangled in the moss...well-captured phrase

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

2 posted 2004-02-03 02:16 AM

Since willows are my favorite the title naturally pulled me in but the poem entraped me. So very short and swift but powerful in its own way. Lovely piece.
~Live and Laugh~

Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less
~Bella~

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2004-02-03 03:14 AM

Rather nifty cool
michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

4 posted 2004-02-03 11:53 PM

Snow: this brought me to tears...truth usually does. ~K~

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

5 posted 2004-02-04 01:40 AM

Back to the top this goes. (BUMP!)

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2004-02-04 08:19 PM

Snow~
Oh WOW .... just WOW~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

[email protected]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2004-02-04 11:49 PM

(big angel hugs) Oh Snow, this is so very heartfelt, sweet friend, weeping willows have always been seen as sad trees to many but when the spring comes, they are the most beautiful belles of the ball and if only the hope is untangled they may look even more gorgeous! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Snow, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

8 posted 2004-02-05 09:23 AM

since this is one of my personal favorites, i'm really happy that you've all received it so well.
thank you !!!

snow

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2004-02-05 02:49 PM

Snow~
Back in for another look at this beauty~

Your word-artistry is so very elegant~

Needs more reads~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

[email protected]

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

10 posted 2004-02-06 01:56 AM

I really liked the way you portrayed this unique
looking tree Snow. It really does seem to have this
kind of mystical feel about it. Like those long
tendril like branches could somehow draw you in,
and trap you inside...

Oooh, now I’m getting scared

And then at the same time, the whole tree can kind
of shimmy in the wind. Swaying back and
forth, in a kind of nature’s hula dance...

Okay, now I’m getting weird... lol

“death awaiting the next heart”

Loved that Snow!

ambrish
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 257
India

11 posted 2004-02-06 07:49 AM

nice poem.

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