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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-02-03 12:03 PM

While the silence of new snow mounts upon the lake
My footsteps leave the print of paws, a spirit and a cause
Before my eyes, your smile is softer than the sleepy skies
Where layers upon layers of colors pause their summit rise
For what has brought me here, in time enough to hold you dear
My only self, washed open in the melting of a new moon’s tear
The strength of you, the shy of you, uncovering of morning hue
Where face to face, surrounded in enchantments lace
I look into the stars, setting fires in my soul to blaze
And grow familiar in each curve that molds your touch
As I fall into you

Copyright Kkh 2/3/04

© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2004-02-03 12:09 PM

this is so romantic.

Cold hands means a warm heart

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-02-03 12:12 PM

Diamond -- this was captivatingly beautiful! ! !

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2004-02-03 12:12 PM

I love the last line of this beautiful poem..."As I fall into you"...so powerful

Michelle_loves_Mike

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since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2004-02-03 02:55 AM

Diamond,,,so very nice
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Magnus

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Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2004-02-03 03:52 PM

Beautifully done, as always, by a masterful
writer....very masterful...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-02-03 03:58 PM

Beautiful as always Kathleen...
Your writing is always so romantic
and that last line.....twas

~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2004-02-03 04:03 PM

You do have a habit of making all of your poems sparkle...

well done, Kathleen.

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

8 posted 2004-02-03 05:53 PM

TD, a beautiful melody of romance
just flowed from your words...

Beautiful!

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