Open Poetry #31 |
When I Close My Eyes (Repost from open #24 for Valentine's Day) |
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
When I close my eyes I can picture you So perfectly I can picture everything From your dark brown eyes And muscular chest Down to your bare feet When I close my eyes I feel the warmth of your body So close to mine So close That I can feel the heat radiate When I close my eyes I can feel your lips Softly brush against mine And at times Your lips kiss mine so passionaitely I can't get my breathe For what seems like an eternity When I close my eyes You are mine To have and to hold Like a threefold cord That never can be broke When I close my eyes I feel the passion The love When I close my eyes Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
I'd know that feeling. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This is a good one for reposting for Valentine's Day! Sounds like true love to me! |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
sigh...brings to mind sweet images of my own love, Beautiful write. ~Live and Laugh~ Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Oh yes,,,to visualize my Mikey,,,from his natural neon blonde hair, to ice blue eyes, to cute round,,,,,,well, you get it,,, Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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