Insoluble Is Her Unbridled Kiss (600th post - For Michelle!)

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

0 posted 2004-02-02 09:52 PM

Insoluble Is Her Unbridled Kiss

Insoluble is her unbridled kiss,
Insatiable eyes I can not dismiss,
Affectionate touches arrest my heart,
Incertitude irks me when we're apart.

Soft-heartedness has always been her way,
Detestation 's a word she can not say,
Enlightenment one can find in her eyes,
Fabrications' are still, naught more than lies.

Vicarious smiles assure that she cares,
Diminutive gifts take me unawares,
Affinity thou bequeathed her thy name,
Notwithstanding this love I would proclaim.

Articulate is my love for thee dear,
For beatitude will ever persevere.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

celestecat
Junior Member

since 2004-02-02

Posts 29

1 posted 2004-02-02 10:11 PM

i enjoyed this one. gives new meaning to the words blind love.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2004-02-02 11:12 PM

"Vicarious smiles assure that she cares,
Diminutive gifts take me unawares,
Affinity thou bequeathed her thy name,
Notwithstanding this love I would proclaim."

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this wonderful sonnet, sweet friend, and may you vicariously be watched by the smiles of rue love from your hearts window, God Bless You, may the sun always shine prisms in for you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kevin, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

3 posted 2004-02-03 12:17 PM

Wow. No, really...WOW!

This is very good...and what "hot" is to me.

McLean

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

4 posted 2004-02-03 01:29 AM

Such a beautiful poem.
I love it.

:-)

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

5 posted 2004-02-03 03:08 AM

This one feels good
congrads on 600
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-02-03 04:40 AM

lucky lady

congrats on 600!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2004-02-03 08:10 AM

Lovely statements for Michelle.
Enjoyed this.
Margherita

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2004-02-03 08:18 AM

EvocativeVerse2
That's about as good as it gets. Enjoyed

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2004-02-03 09:02 AM

Beautiful Kevin...
and...yes, she is one lucky lady!!
Hugs~

~ At the touch of love
everyone becomes a poet ~

Plato.

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

10 posted 2004-02-03 09:52 AM

Congrats on 600 posts. And this is a truly romantic write.

believe in what your heart feels...

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2004-02-03 10:58 AM

Congratulations on 600 posts, Kevin. It's good
to see you here more. And, this is a very sweet
and romantic poem to Michelle.

Hugs

Ethel

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.