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The Weight of Words
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The Weight of Words |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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The Weight of Words Heavy with anticipation the wait of words builds a wall, each day, forming a dungeon like environment where blindfolded and chained the thoughts grow the pain of never knowing. Comfort is but a breath away, a window on tomorrow. Its surge protected by a hazy mind, whose dreams are dedicated but untouchable in the shadows. And so the story goes... she owns the pierced heart but watches from the sidelines, those words not near enough to fill the heard with a chorus of Romeo and Juliet, an affection tender and deep. Life is a play and she enters in a gamble, artfully maneuvering the faithfulness of one. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
As beautiful as always, Maureen. I really enjoyed reading.  Hugs, Ethel |
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Kie Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 77USA |
So many comments on this one. Eloquent, classical, flowing from one word to the next. Everything in balance and the ending was the clincher for me. I could go on and on---I am just taken with this one. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Ethel and Kie, thank you for your comments. Sometimes I think words can't say what the body language can...but if it is all one has, well then... *s M |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MzWynter~ How closely aligned, your thoughts and mine~ 'Life is a play and she enters in a gamble, artfully maneuvering the faithfulness of one.' We definitely touch in the knowing here~ Found a graphic depicting 'the weight of words' and was working on it ... but, will wait for another time to post it~  I LOVE THIS ONE, Maureen~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hey Marge..freezing mix coming down... Florida keeps looking better all the time  hugs M |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Expressing thoughts done so beautifully Maureen Hope |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
So true! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
I so know what you mean Maureen. This was great! Thank You! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Life is a play and she enters in a gamble, artfully maneuvering the faithfulness of one." Wow...awesome write M. Love this keeper. Hugs~ ~ I like not only to be loved, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Yay! Oh Maureen, your words hold such a weight to them, a very light weight as graceful as a feather, that shines with the deepest emotion and light! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hope, thanks..I wish you much happiness this year ... Sue, yes...so much of what we write is filled with truth hugs M Richy, glad you could relate *s M Nancy, It's nice to know that someone can feel this..thanks M Noah, always a pleasure to have your words in response hugs M |
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