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Pins and Needles |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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In the next room, I hear doors slamming, and papers wriggling toward the floor. My mood is judgmental, I hear no voices through this wall of mirrors. I took a walk across a frozen river I could glide upon water. So what is it that's needed of me, proof? I'm haunted by your subtlety and your kiss that feels like sleeping muscles in my lips. The pins and needles of your infection. [This message has been edited by Kaoru (02-03-2004 12:42 AM).] |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Always such multi layered depth of feeling...your work is always strong! Thank you for sharing it. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
echoing icebox, said so well of your work always |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very expressive write. Enjoyed reading it. Love, Margherita  |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Always a welcome surprise, your metaphors and imagry... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
I don't know, dear...but I love this line: The pins a needles of your infection. That's very cool sounding. McLean |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A gift of the metaphor. A power poetess. Good work! [sp. wriggling, judgmental] Was it your intention for the last line to read?: The pins "a" needles of your infection. Grover. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hauntingly this, and wickedly beautiful. You've got such wonderful talent Kaoru~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
deep and calmly powerful |
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Laoha Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 161Nevada, USA |
Oh, slowly pinned it down. |
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Fire Fairy Junior Member
since 2003-10-22
Posts 43Australia |
Thoroughly enjoyed. Thank you. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Your style Kaoru, is so uniquely special Your a real treat to read Thank You |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kaoru Deep and beautiful you are! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
one of your best  enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) This is so eerie yet well-written, sweet friend, your poems always have such raw beauty to them, yay, God Bless You, this chimed to me like the chime of the Sprint pin hitting the floor, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Meghan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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