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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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As a Poet To stir myriad feelings daubing colors before you, as a poet might do, this feat, with a simple, solitary line of words to be heard if I could to set thoughts reeling such as a poet should O, I would To splay forth before you a peacock's feather by spill of quill to draw your eye to the eye of plume illumined in green of blue if I could to set feelings pealing such as a poet should O, I would To cause your eye to seek new thoughts and nod your mind as a buttercup bobs on a spring day as words should cast your spirits to fly if I could to breathe beneath your wing such as a poet should O, I would To set before you a state of emotion so that next you glance 'pon the ocean you should feel the crashing waves taste yet the salt that saves if I could sail you thus away such as a poet should oh I would To feed you all that you might desire cause a craving beset by fires cause you internally to crave a need cast before you pearls of seed if I could gift you all this such as a poet should O, I would But mostly, I would set you to loving, craving, needing the word of the poet the song that he wrote by way of placing word to note to cast such feeling in what I wrote if I could… O, I would O, I would re-repost, untouched, from 01.21.01 & 02.02.02 |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
To set before you a state of emotion so that next you glance 'pon the ocean you should feel the crashing waves taste yet the salt that saves if I could sail you thus away such as a poet should ============================== thanking you on 02.02.04  How foolish must man be, not to be impressed by mountains and trees |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"But mostly, I would set you to loving, craving, needing the word of the poet the song that he wrote by way of placing word to note to cast such feeling in what I wrote if I could… O, I would O, I would" Beautiful then....even more beautiful now. Thank you for this. Hugs~ ~ At the touch of love |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
As a Poet .... you inspire so wonderfully, dear Karilea! Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
And you do!!  |
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Amara Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 158East of the moon, west of the sun. |
To cause your eye to seek new thoughts and nod your mind as a buttercup bobs on a spring day as words should cast your spirits to fly if I could to breathe beneath your wing such as a poet should O, I would And don't you think you already do, love? Honestly, you can't be *that* modest, we all give you permission to recognise your genius. We all have. Light keep you always, Amara May light keep you, faith guide you, and love and laughter always find you. |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
Oh, you do! Oh, you do! Your words are as tempting and delicious as Hershey's Pot of Gold! Absolutely tasty words, so full of much more that alphabet scribble! McLean |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Mmm this belongs at the top! Back it goes Sunshine! Love it! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
you certainly could and you certainly have...this is a penned picasso, a masterpiece...thank you so much |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
You can certainly leave one at a loss for words ... )>((((o> |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh Karilea, you could, you would, and you sure do! (angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, you fit the description of a poet as you wear the peacock plumage in your aura, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Such very lovely verse, dear Poet! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
All that you would... you do. *S* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You poets...  Thank you! |
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