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Naturally Sweet (5-7-5) |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
pudgy fingertips sticky sweet with confections from Heaven's kitchen I'm having a very mommy night and feeling very blessed to have my family...healthy, happy and home with me |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This instantly brought to mind moments of salt-water taffy pulling AND white divinity! Yum! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
I am going to show this beautiful poem to my wife when she gets up...It was her birthday yesterday and all her kids were home..she had a "mommy day" enjoyed _______ice ><> |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
What a sweet poem... |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
I'm glad you enjoyed this brief one... Ice, I'm flattered you enjoyed the arrangement so. My heart is so full with happy because of my beautiful family. I know everyone gets their own meaning from a read, but I wanted to write this one's origin, for me: Pudgy fingertips (Did you ever notice how incredibly soft fat little baby fingers are?) Sticky sweet with confections (toddlers always have those sticky fingers from trying out their independence in feeding) From Heaven's Kitchen (I think babies are our closest touch, directly from Heaven, and I like to think you can find traces of it, physically, on them) This is my personal favorite creation... Thanks, again! McLean |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Just great! and full of Love.....~C |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
McLean Since all my kids are well on their way the only puggy finger tips are my own. LOL Enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I couldn't agree with you more, as I believe children are the most beautiful creation of God and they are what bring sunshine into lives! (big angel hugs) Yay, I dream of being a daddy someday so I can experience this bliss, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet McLean, thank you for sharing!    May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This was a precious write... There is nothing sweeter than the scents, sounds and touches of our children. All Blessings, TD |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Short and very sweet.  This one will surely stick with us.  Punfully delightful! I hope my glucose level hasn't gone up after reading this one. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
McLean, Let's see 5 and 7 and 5, right? In seventeen words, you described some of my fondest memories! Loved your wording! Sadelite |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
 So nice to be browsing the pages at the same time as you, Sadelite, my friend. Thank you for your kind words...warm, breakfast time delight!McLean |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~smiling~ M |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very nice! Eric |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
And when they grow into teens the only thing sticky are the dishes they leave in the sink... Very sweet piece. "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." ~Dido~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
McLean, I loved the poem, as well as your interpretation thereof.......... Pudgy fingertips (Did you ever notice how incredibly soft fat little baby fingers are?) Sticky sweet with confections (toddlers always have those sticky fingers from trying out their independence in feeding) From Heaven's Kitchen (I think babies are our closest touch, directly from Heaven, and I like to think you can find traces of it, physically, on them) This is just precious! Hugs to you and your family  Ethel |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Wonderful writing Mclean! Loved it! What wonderful thoughts! Richy |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
Thanks everyone...you make my day bright with your kind responses to what I think is my simplest, but most complex, poem! Absolutely the most inspiring things in my life, my 3 sons! I'm glad they've brought smiles to you all, too! McLean |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
McLean Loved this one especially after you enlightened everyone on what inspired the write. My wife and I are expecting our 3rd child in February. Can wait to experience the pudgy, sticky little fingers and thank the lord for my gift from heaven. Garfield |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
I'm so happy for your anticipated arrival, ggrn3! Yay! Cherrish those little, soft, unspoken wonders of a newborn, as I'm sure you and your wife already know, since this will be your 3rd precious one. McLean |
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