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Wind's Path
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Wind's Path |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
The wind's icy path |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
too cold and windy to go to the beach, but I went in my heart with this poem thank you for the visit |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Way to cold to go to the beach here...but I love the poem. It is short, sweet, and to the point. Bravo! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
too cold and windy to go to the beach, but I went in my heart with this poem thank you for the visit My pleasure Dixie...well it warmed way up to the 20's Sunday and the beach was truly wondrous...[I'm not a polar bear, but visit an elderly uncle who lives by the beach]  ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Way to cold to go to the beach here...but I love the poem. It is short, sweet, and to the point. Bravo! Thank you... ~P |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
The wind's icy path traced in white caps and foam; rushing waters. yes it is traced what an eye you have, stemming from the open or original mind, maybe u are familiar with the path yourself |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
stemming from the open or original mind, maybe u are familiar with the path yourself Lighting my way |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
White caps and foam, eh? Makes me cold to think of it, even without the icy wind... Brrrrr! McLean |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
choshi - I agree, too cold for the beach, but now in front of a warm fireplace reading this poem, just lovely... BC |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A lovely poem! Grover. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Whoa, breath-taking! |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
moonlight kisses sparkle the sand waves erase all Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
ooo brrr, i see the image in reality I also sense it in emotion great write! ~K~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Paul, this is wonderfully detailed, sweet friend, we certainly have gotten some of this finally here in Colorado, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
even without the icy wind... Brrrrr! McLean.......Yes, bitter-cold,bone-chilling, too cold for snow....Thank you McLean ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
but now in front of a warm fireplace reading this poem, just lovely... BC ...adding the warm fireplace certainly is a welcome shift...Thank you Bill ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
A lovely poem! Grover Thank you Grover, and nice to be meeting you, welcome....~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Whoa, breath-taking! Thank you Iliana.... ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
moonlight kisses sparkle the sand waves erase all Michelle moonlight; glittering on wave-tossed shells along the shoreline. Thank you Michelle ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
ooo brrr, i see the image in reality I also sense it in emotion great write! ~K~ Thank you ~K....... ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
, we certainly have gotten some of this finally here in Colorado, Wow! Noah, finally!!! enjoy ~P |
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