Open Poetry #31 |
SWING TIME |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
SWING TIME (A Candy Heart Poem) By: Noah Eaton 2/13/03 Hey baby, the way you look tonight Seems to get my feet tapping to the beat On this sapphire balustrade we'll dance in the moonlight Lindy-hoppin' with the jitterbugs in this East Coast Swing 12 bar blues, darling, you give me the St. Louis flu Shim Shammin' and walkin' that walk with Tacky Anne Baby, I think I'm madly in love with you It's not in the cards, it is all there in your hands They say "to know how to dance, is to know how to control yourself!" I felt those Bojangles of Harlem at first glance How your silver sandals boogie-woogie like church bells I've got you under my skin And your heart beats with mine in syncopation God knows swinging ain't no original sin Wait till I add in the Latin twist You pick me up, you dust me off As far as I am concerned, with you it's always swing time You're my winners dance, my beach bop lollipop Turn and shuffle with me to the daylight... "You'll find something that's enough to keep you But if the bright lights don't receive you You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20 |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Noah...I certainly think you know a bit about dancin', Bud! Thanks for this! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Brad_Smith Member
since 2004-01-09
Posts 70Dallas, Texas |
This brings back great memories for me as well as the heart that sings with that swing. Thanks for the read. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Razamataz Noah! You're the cat's jammies...! Dig it! Be Bop Ba Boo Bop Boo Bop! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
ah...love this! *got me dancin' in my seat* Dawn |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
wanna dance sailor? |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Lets boogie (will fight with myself not to say boogie oobie oogie) The graphics were a very nice touch Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Kie Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 77USA |
Your poem made me smile. It had a lyrical, flirtateous aire to it and it was simply divine. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Noah, wow -- what an original! |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
You make me want to dance now. *puts in the Eiffel 65 CD* Awesome poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, my goodness... I'll be singing and smiling for hours! *S* Excellent write, my friend... I greatly enjoyed! |
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