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A Wondrous Dream
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A Wondrous Dream |
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Kie Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 77USA |
A Wondrous Dream I had a wondrous dream last night Like magic, wishes came true It brought such joy into my heart I must tell you how I flew! I was standing outside It was summertime Barefoot in the dew Covered in a white lawn gown It billowed when the wind blew Staring at the constellations Connecting all the dots I wished upon the brightest one I found the wishing jackpot In awe, the star fell from the sky A lovely vision to behold With grace it knelt in front of me Then began to unfold The transformation was surreal A carriage it did form Cautiously I touched the door I knew then it was real Once inside, away we flew Soaring thru the skies Every wish that came to mind The carriage always knew Snowcapped mountains A lovely view So pale in the moonlight Mass statutes of delight We skimmed across the oceans Like rocks skipped in a pond Leaning, we tipped sideways My fingers caught the waves I flew to all the places I’ve always longed to go Way to many, to share with you Secrets only for me to know Time flew by, I think it did I was left with but one wish So we landed on another star And this is what I did I leaped right from the carriage Laughing & jumping up and down The star began to twinkle Then homeward I was bound Remember if you’re out one night And you see a twinkling star Someone might have got their wish They see you from afar…. |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
welcome to passions! I really do love this poem!!!! Especially... Remember if you’re out one night And you see a twinkling star Someone might have got their wish They see you from afar…. you have mail... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   (big angel hugs) Awwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is a most magical and uplifting debut, yay! May you always hop on the carriage to the moon and see all the stars twinkle blessings for you, God Bless You, I've had many dreams like this, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Kie, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
this is a delightful first post! welcome to passions! and thank you for that touch of whimsy, its brought a big smile to my heart.  |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
Welcome to Passions, Kie! Lovely entrance you have made. Did you know that on an ordinary night, not too cloudy, not too bright, you can see at least 40 "falling" stars? Just spreading a little trivia around the galaxy! Again, welcome! McLean |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions. Such vitality in your write... warm wishes ThisDiamond |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Yes...welcome, Kie! Thank you for posting such a light and lively first write! I'll look forward to reading more! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! I so much enjoyed your entrance post! I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Is that love I see in your eyes... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
What a wondrous dream, indeed! I will remember this! WELCOME TO PASSIONS, KIE!  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kie, this is a very beautiful poem. Thank you so very much for sharing it with us. I really look forward to reading more of your workk. And Welcome to Passions. I think you will enjoy it here. Hugs  Ethel |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Welcome to Passions Kie. We're glad you joined. Pull up a chair, and enjoy. Enjoyed your post! Richy |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Welcome to PIP, Kie! Love the surprises in dream poems. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful piece! Welcome to Passions  |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Welcome to Passions I enjoyed this work very, very much,,,,it takes you into that dream, and lets you feel it Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
liked it. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
welcome to the passion...helen |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kie Welcome and a lovely write. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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