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In the Manner of You
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In the Manner of You |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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In The Manner of You I know I question "yesterday" for I am a collector of meaning and surround myself in words, listening for the flow of memory, that touch that keys me into you. There is always that kiss, the one that parts the truth, leaving passion up for bids. Home alone, I draw you standing before me, circling. Your sphere of influence always of interest, pulling me to your center needing your warmth, hoping for more. And when there, across from you, I watch your lips move, your eyes talk and your body communicate the unsaid. Maybe it is wishful thinking. But, you have it, you know. My heart... It rests with you. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ooooh Maureen.....now this I love! I hereby claim this piece a 'keeper'. Into my library it goes! Hugs~ ~ Is that love I see in your eyes... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Nancy, I am so cold I thought I would write something to warm me up in thought~  Hugs M |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
love this... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow! I like this. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
M - I haven't been around for a few days and am trying to catch up with my reading a little. This, well, this was so warm and loving. And, so beautifully and softly written! |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A number 1. An A+. Extraordinary work! Grover. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Wow! Sphere of influence, I love that comparison, after all, a sphere is not marking a territory, just a general interest in a territory, and that's how love should be treated, belonging and sharing but not usurping! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"Maybe it is wishful thinking. But, you have it, you know. My heart... It rests with you." *sigh*...it hurts so good to give your heart away...(well for a little while anyway!) beautiful!  ~Dawn |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gawd! this is such a good ache! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MzWynter~ If your words can make me feel the warmth, AND THEY DO ... I think you may just do the trick of keeping you warm too~ Maureen ... this is simply beautifully graceful~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Woohoo nakdthoughts. Love this. Now I am glad I stopped in to read some poetry this morning...if I had missed this I'd have missed a masterpiece. Bravo my friend. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
KristieSue, thank you hugs Sue, glad you enjoyed iliana, that's how it was meant to be...warm and loving *s...thank you for stopping by Grover, I am pleased you enjoyed my words and welcome. Noah, belonging and sharing, my you are smart for your age hugs M Dawn, love your new picture..been out breaking up ice on the walks so I haven't had much time to respond yet. I am not hurting...even if my words seem like it. Thank you hugs M Dixie, well if it is an ache then I am enjoying it. Marge, yes I am warm at the moment...and when I wrote this. Thanks dearest...I love your responses hugs M Hey there EV2, thanks for visiting this morning..sometimes it gets pretty lonely. *s M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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