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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2004-01-25 12:08 PM

Silhouette         of gentle light,
the moon dancing     upward
facing          the night alone
proving that existence
still roams freely,     softly

even in troubled times
~~**~~

I lie awake at night
I reach out to touch
Feel you by my side
I reach I never feel you
Will I ever get to feel you again
Just one more time

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

1 posted 2004-01-25 12:14 PM

Mother Earth in all her plight
Dost twist and turn as in respite
Of filtered discernment which causes pain
God's merciful pathway does remain

Great words from you!

McLean

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2004-01-25 08:24 AM

Greeneyes - and it does it as softly as this write...

BC

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2004-01-25 08:26 AM

your words are always so soothing,,,enjoyed
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

4 posted 2004-01-25 10:19 AM

Silhouette         of gentle light,
the moon dancing     upward
facing          the night alone
proving that existence
still roams freely,     softly

even in troubled times
~~**~~

terse, deep, thoughtful ... oh yes, that solitary moon so silent in its rising, falling, waxing, waning...~C

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

5 posted 2004-01-25 10:21 AM

I love your images...so welcomed in my heart today. A touch of beauty I so very needed.

Patricia

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2004-01-25 10:35 AM

Greeneyes
Now this is lovely.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2004-01-25 10:38 AM

Yes, Lauren...
what Sy sighed...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2004-01-25 11:14 AM

Some things can never be washed away, huh
Lauren...

You poetically pen the fluff of a down
pillow, the touch of a silver cloud...

So very well!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2004-01-25 11:51 AM

GreenEyes~
You pen the gentle~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

[email protected]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

10 posted 2004-01-25 12:35 PM

Lovely, Lady~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2004-01-25 12:44 PM

even in troubled times

beautiful

sweet_lost_palestinian1
Member

since 2004-01-08

Posts 90

12 posted 2004-01-25 01:15 PM

very very nice poem ..keep it in touch and keep posting more...:-]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

13 posted 2004-01-25 06:49 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, you are always a beacon of moonlight even in the most troubled of times, sweet friend, your poetry makes the moon dance and smile, yay, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

14 posted 2004-01-26 02:37 AM

i like that there was room
for me to see what i want...

always a delight to read you, lauren.

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

15 posted 2004-01-26 03:38 AM

Lauren, this is so softly sweet,
with a little tinge of sadness.

, my friend

ggrn3
Member

since 2000-08-17

Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.

16 posted 2004-01-26 04:44 AM

Oh, How nice this was.

Garfield

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

17 posted 2004-01-26 05:45 AM

Loved this Lauren!
Exquisite!

It’s a marvelous night for
a moondance
With the stars shining
up in the sky

A fantabulous time
to remember
All the beauty
you hold deep inside

Glad I got to read it!

Take Care,
Richy

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

18 posted 2004-01-26 05:48 AM

the lovely truth, Lauren,
you express it well
*s
M

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

19 posted 2004-01-27 02:00 PM

lovely write...beautiful imagery

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

20 posted 2004-01-27 03:15 PM

Beautifully penned pretty lady.
Hugs~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

21 posted 2004-01-27 03:19 PM

This is lovely, Lauren...
both in sentiment and verse...

Hugs, my friend...
"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

22 posted 2004-01-28 09:20 AM

YES L~ Outstanding write hon.

One constant in life is definately the fact that once you manage to get past one obstacle, another one will surely arise, and we as the women that we are, holding the strength that we do, will always rise to the occasion!
~Me~

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