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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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Throw me a ray of light this winter is on overdrive i've become delirious the hail is the fury of greatgod coming to get me what sins i have accrued of late, o woe is me! throw another log on, let's unscamble yet another word i'll never hear in the streets of life, drink up and pour me a bud, i'm shivering and apathetic news of the world can't touch me, i'm numb, how did i end up in cold climte, how did i end up here, a suburban dramamama, when my spirit cries for redemption, i'm evolving,like the crescent moon waiting to come full circle, i'm fertile as the trees ring me in yet another season, i'm slipping on the ice i've hit my head, but i'm still sadly earthbound, another spirit visitng the material world, much the same plight as the stone or the turtle, why am i doomed to look up in the spaces between the cloud formations, and be pulled to a love that cant be, months and months since i've worn your smell on me, the day you deliverd me from the pallor and the darkness that drained my spirit for decades,playing this character in a half baked charade (c.lol) that no longer can keep me? you woke me only to leave me suspended again, in wait of one like you, that never comes, o woe is me pass the prozac please knock me on my ass and let me be comatized again, living in a bubble, i didnt know any better anyhow somewhere in the caribbean, there's an rich englishwoman that took my face, swinging in a hammock, an island girl is braiding her hair, beautiful and stoned, and she's dreaming what it would be like to live the rasta life [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-25-2004 08:38 AM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so sad. But beautifully written. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
Some of this is sad, some dreamy. Interesting write, as always! McLean |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Michele - many thoughts you write, you do this well... BC |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
bill o bill where the heck have you been? ive been emailing you |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Oh! how you weave sadness and deep longings so passionately into dream images.... "somewhere in the Caribbean..." Now i'm dreaming too...~C |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"you woke me only to leave me suspended again, in wait of one like you, that never comes, o woe is me pass the prozac please knock me on my ass and let me be comatized again, living in a bubble, i didnt know any better anyhow" wow, this is awesome...you have packed so much emotion into this...this is very well done. ~Dawn |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gawd mishy, this is sad |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You're one of a kind, girlie~ Made me want to jump off the deep end and swim to the Caribbean.  |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
lots of words...lots of good stuff |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) I too have always wanted to live by the oceanside, and I always wonder how we end up where we are as I prefer other climates over this! (sigh) But I'm moving to Portland next spring, it'll be a different experience there, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michele, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for reading kids |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
This needs a good bumping! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess I wish I may I wish I might have the wish I wish tonight. Enjoyed. |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
you woke me only to leave me suspended again, in wait of one like you, that never comes, o woe is me ....In all this sadness and longing, what humor, satirical even.....But isnt that one moment of wakefulness and heartfelt connection quite the antidote to a comatose life...! [a little time off from the lifetime sentence for good behavior?] ~P |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes, the bumps are a blessing, bboy thanks sy, i wish this wish too for you paulie: ....In all this sadness and longing, what humor, satirical even.....But isnt that one moment of wakefulness and heartfelt connection quite the antidote to a comatose life...! [a little time off from the lifetime sentence for good behavior?] ~P YES!!! believe it or not, it's worth it and the satire....who best but me to laugh at me im my own poison and my own antedote, time and time again |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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