Open Poetry #31 |
Two Quivers |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Two Quivers Silver dollars falling Frigid teardrops hang in air How do you spell snow? How many snow scenes? This old tree has stood so long Eye witness, waiting. Seasons pass among its limbs, Life shivering in silence. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A really good winter poem, uplifting. Nice pic. Grover. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You always find the right words to go with the scenery you graciously give us. Thanx KJ |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
:: :: stunning in every way. snow "...why does my skeleton pursue me |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea Lovely to look at, delightful to read! And, you spell snow....brrrrrrrrr! Warm hugs! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) That tree must have witnessed an infinite number of snow moments, with each snowflake fairy looking different than the other ut all sharing a common emotion! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is most gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH WOW!!! Loving both the words and the picture! Well done Sis! Hugs~ ~ Is that love I see in your eyes... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh my! Sunshine, you capture time so well! I haven't been around for about a week and I have missed your writing. |
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Tais Member
since 2004-01-28
Posts 92Ontario, Canada |
Sunshine, that is so beautiful. The words describe the picture wonderfully. I enjoyed your poetry very much. Tais |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
These are beautiful poems, Karilea. I have only one minor suggestion that could make these poems even better. If you could have stranded some kitties in that tree before you took the picture, it would have made my heart sing! lol |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
burrrrr! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
K what a fine poem..i love snow and trees and to combine them both is great....trees really have seen everything...the changing scene of life....lived in slow motion.... Loved the picture too... Thank you.... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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