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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
I found a magnet of Diana in a church yard 1961 - 1997 I hope there is a heaven- I think there is. I think. Placed in the center of a bustling home of homeless, Jamie, Kung Fu, Mark, the Dias Brothers, and Kevin. Open the Big Silver Door that leads to another world of cubic misfits. Bottled Water Bell Pepper Ramono, 100% grated Mango Zesty Italian Salad Mix Crumbled Blue Cheese Crab Cakes Tofu Burgers Apple Butter Grapefruit Marston’s Oyster Stout And a few in clear containers I’m afraid might scream and shout as they spring out, over the kitchen floor, time to close the door, night Diana. Back at the wooden table, an old People magazine sits under a plant I finally decide to water. A story about a SuperModel... Gia Bath Gala Beads Young Queen Actress Rational Headline Mountain Tumbling Overwhelming Truncated Overnight Detectors Botanical Intensive Address Stalked Heroin Sprint Paris Cake Bye |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) I'm not sure if I'm on track, but this ade me think of Gia, who was tragically depressed despite her success and died from an overdose of pills! (sad sigh) Gia is just an example of that we must concentrate on the inner-beauty than focus on the silicone and loss of cellulite, God Bless You, this is powerful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
I'm really not certain of how to interpret this one... excellent imagery though. Grover. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
wintertao I found this very interesting and rich with a variety of emotion. Impactful for me...thank you. |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
for some reason I could really hear this one being read in my head...great job! |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
I read it twice, I still don't get it. The ingredients sound rather yummy, though! McLean |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
A picture, on the magazine, a picture in your kitchen. An interesting picture. |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
Had to read this one a few times and think - very creative. I liked what you did here.  |
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Tais Member
since 2004-01-28
Posts 92Ontario, Canada |
Wintertao, I love the style! It is different and so creative. It also gives us so many different interpretations. That is wonderful! Can you tell us about your write? It would be nice to know what you wanted us to interpret it as. Tais |
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