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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-02-01 03:51 AM

dormant

i paste forgotten kisses on the wall
when you leave the room
and hours past
i still feel your hands
against my eyes
your lips
to my cheek
and while i
gather the memory of your body
to force away the emptiness
i'm crocheted in a web of
of trailing tongues and misgivings
on the nape of my neck

snow©2003

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

1 posted 2004-02-01 04:00 AM

Hi Snow,

This is so heartwarming.

I know this feeling so well.

Thank You
I needed this.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2004-02-01 04:41 AM

Snow, this is very sweet.

Hugs

Ethel

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

3 posted 2004-02-01 05:20 AM

Snow,
You've evoked me into feeling this bitter-sweet one that lingers each time I read it. Nice write!
Sadelite

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2004-02-01 05:01 PM

(big angel hugs) Awwwwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet friend, there come times where the buds are dormant but the roots are always in the ground and love leaves traces of ambrosia and honey behind! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Snow, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

5 posted 2004-02-04 03:45 PM

this one neeeeds to be seen again...loved the line:
"i
gather the memory of your body
to force away the emptiness "

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

6 posted 2004-02-04 04:10 PM

A very good poem. Grover.

Jack- In- The- Green
Junior Member

since 2003-09-11

Posts 31
The green woodlands.

7 posted 2004-02-05 07:52 AM

Snow brilliant poetry from your dark and cold heart, my woodlands do not like too much snow,but they can bear a dusting of white beauty.
Tell me do you like lakes and sea's with a ''watermark''?

Jack.

Have you seen jack-in -the green he taps his cain on the ground and signals the snowdrops it's time to grow.

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

8 posted 2004-02-05 09:11 AM

richy, i'm glad you could get something you needed from this read, thank you!

ethel, thank you very much.

sadelite, i like knowing my words can bring about a feeling that won't let go :-) , thank you!

noah, thank you so much for your heartfelt thoughts.

steaven, thank you very much!!

grover, glad you liked it, thank you.

jack, not really sure what to say... i don't have a dark cold heart.... but i thank you for reading.
snow

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

9 posted 2004-02-05 09:44 AM

.........PUUURRRRRRR.........
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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