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Sun of faith
Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 101

0 posted 2004-01-31 10:45 PM

Walking to no-where
My feet never finding ground
I grow ever so tired
From achieving nothing

Walking without steps
As time stands still
Destination in my sight
Yet im not able to see it

I wish i could walk
And move a little foward
For I am standing still
My life is motionless

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2004-01-31 11:27 PM

Sometimes motionless is peace, sometimes frustration...it is the fire of the soul that enchants emotion.
Welcome to Passions.
ThisDiamond

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2004-02-01 12:25 PM

(smiles) Just take "baby steps" like Bob does in the movie "What About Bob?" and taking it one step at a time you can go anywhere, do anything, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-02-01 11:51 PM

I call that standing still "pauses." I think life has pauses before something important happens. Keep the faith, Sun of Faith! Welcome to Passions!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-02-02 04:58 AM

me and you both

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2004-02-02 01:18 PM

SunOfFaith~
May each poetic step you take bring you closer to knowing the path of your goals~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

6 posted 2004-02-02 01:26 PM

Great piece. Love it!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

7 posted 2004-02-02 08:12 PM

how well you have captured a universal feeling

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

8 posted 2004-02-02 08:14 PM

A very good poem. Keep on expressing yourself! Grover.

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